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I mean It is what it is I’m surprised that it hasn’t taken the author 100 chapters to start this book. I mean it might get better but I wouldn’t hold my breath for it, it’s 30 chapters in and all he’s done is kinda worked 1 day and then spent the rest of it with some chick and freaked out about the chicks boyfriend coming to kill him when the boyfriend doesn’t even know who the MC is. All I’ll say is that this book really lives up to its title about being third-rate

I Fell Into A Third-Rate Smut Novel As A Trashy Gangster

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Ooof. That hurt 😞 Technically, a lot more happed in 31 chapters, but I can understand your point. The pacing isn't what it's ideally supposed to be, and it's my fault. I can't fix what I've already written. I can only try to make things better in the future chapters. But I do hope that you drop by when the novel hits around 50-60 chapters. I'll do my best to make you change the rating by then.