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read up to chapter 130 entertaining at the beginning but the pace is too slow and it turned into too much "slice of life" chapters that i gave up. another complaint i have is about the verbal interactions of the main character with pretty much everyone else. it is too smooth, it's as if everyone (including the mc) just always say what they truly think and in a way where the recipients absorbs 100% of the information conveyed. that is not realistic and breaks the immersion. in real life there is a spectrum of people. i guess a way to put this kids conversations (overly simplistic, one dimensional interactions)

The First Legendary Beast Master

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返事はありません。最初になろう!