Review Detail of ATriste in The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor

Wow okay, quite the ride. This story's world is pretty interesting, especially with the latest chapter's development. A very different and very cool take on the use of systems in a novel. I like it, it will lead to a lot of new development for the genre. There are some definite grammar and punctuation errors, and some parts seem slightly rushed, but with polish, I think this story has a lot of potential (story essence is far more important than technique that can still be refined). I can nitpick a few other things, but in the end, it's the author's story to tell, and they seem quite capable of telling a good one. Good luck, and I look forward to future updates.