Review Detail of HegemonDao in Echoes of the Ascendant: Whispers of the Heart, Echoes of Duty

This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Anyways, about the novel, give it a try, as it is my first novel, I may have made a lot of mistakes. Maybe the plot is not inconsistent. Maybe you feel everything is too sudden or maybe everything is slow. The chapters are long... Blah Blah... But give it a try. I have a very interesting story in my mind, and when attempting to put them into words, there is probably many shortcomings. But that's how everything at first, Isn't it? So read it. And feel it. Maybe, you'll like it. And if you do like this, read the next chapter and then the next chapter and so on.... And finally, congratulations, you have become a fan...😊