Review Detail of Daoist_Cv4412 in Era of Players: Death God

Item: Era of Players: Death God
Rating: 3.6

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Story seems to be fine but.... 1. Needs a lot of editing. Sentences can get very strange. 2. Starts a chapter with a big chunk of last chapter's end.

Nickaido

3の人に「いいね!」しました

返事はありません。最初になろう!