I got two observations when i first started reading. First of all, incredible writing. No major errors stood out to me and the writing was clean all across the board. The second thing was the dialogue. Boy oh boy, did I like it. The worldbuilding is great and the book is amazing if you're willing to sit, kickback and enjoy it. Cheers!
The_Forgotten_
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!