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Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv42mthAliiireza

The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)

Building a Business Empire with my Technological System

Faux1231

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UniverseM007
UniverseM007Lv3UniverseM007

one question will this novel go into space aswell. or you will going to finish the story like that other novel. where he just built a spaceship and the story finished .if it's like that then I don't want to read this book.

novelmeister
novelmeisterLv15novelmeister

Yes, the trend amongst writers on this platform is to compromise character and world integrity for a grand show of theatrics, like a character awakening power instantly or achieving a goal that would take years in a few chapters, simply for reader retention because readers these days hop out of a story if there isn’t a major event every few chapters.

emjason
emjasonLv4emjason

Please which one is that? Been looking for a good technological novel lately? Can you recommend?

Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv4Aliiireza

I don't know, I didn't continue reading it

UniverseM007:one question will this novel go into space aswell. or you will going to finish the story like that other novel. where he just built a spaceship and the story finished .if it's like that then I don't want to read this book.
Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv4Aliiireza

Scholar’s Advanced Technological System

emjason:Please which one is that? Been looking for a good technological novel lately? Can you recommend?
Devil_Immortal
Devil_ImmortalLv3Devil_Immortal

This is a good technology based novel, but the growth of MC and his business is fast paced and he is jumping from energy sector to transport sector and then to pharmaceutical sector. He has no background on medicine how can others believe he is the inventor of said medicine.