A complete 10/10.The grammar is good and the plot is interesting. The thought of the crowd believing that she wanted to coming suicide while she just wanted to get some fresh is crazy and humorous. The overall story is amazing and perfectly structured. I can't wait for your next update and keep up the great work :)
Ash20
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!