Review Detail of zes13 in Advent of the Three Calamities

Item: Advent of the Three Calamities
Rating: 1.8

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zes13Lv114mthzes13

Yeah no.. I thought this would be a dark story but yikes, chessy lines, amateurish writing. I felt like i was reading a diary of a 15 year old with some fantasy elements. Main character is beyond edgy and dialogues are out of the place.

Advent of the Three Calamities

Entrail_JI

5の人に「いいね!」しました

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Entrail_JI作者Entrail_JI

Thank you for your honesty!

4mth

VelstadLv13Velstad

I can somewhat understand the cheesy part (even thought I don't agree) but the amateur writing is insane to say, the author's writing is top notch

3mth

zes13Lv11zes13

No.

Velstad:I can somewhat understand the cheesy part (even thought I don't agree) but the amateur writing is insane to say, the author's writing is top notch

3mth

Dexter_Sled_1111Lv12Dexter_Sled_1111

Okay.

zes13:No.

2mth

The_Envious_OneLv14The_Envious_One

Up to chapter 1 is crazy

1mth