Review Detail of LastGod in In Marvel with the Force?

Breaking of the fourth wall. Immature style of writing where he talks to me like I'm some pledge at a frat. Horribly boring story with no pacing or forward motion. He goes to Xavier school to study and work and get stronger. Yet, he spends a bunch of his time just f****** around with other classmates. I don't want to see a fan Fic about somebody going to school in Marvel. Basically, it's a rip-off deadpool without the semi immortality.