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Psyzone
PsyzoneLv15mthPsyzone

The Grammer itself is really good and the writing quality is okay but the story telling is evidently amateurish. Additionally this isn't anything new, it's just another danmachi fic with the 'Psyker' powers inserted. Which is the problem the writer doesn't understand how Psyker powers in 40k work. You could literally replace this with dnd magic system and it would be the same novel. I'm gonna come back and delete this review if the psyker powers actually become accurate to 40k with their associated risks.

Reborn in Danmachi as a Psyker

Cruel_Potato

9の人に「いいね!」しました

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Paralda
ParaldaLv4Paralda

if you are interested in a good psyker fic, i recommend ''the voices'' from clarencelackclarity on QQ,if you don't mind female mc and yuri

Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv4Novel_Guru

Plot and story is taking shape bro.

A_calm_daoist
A_calm_daoistLv1A_calm_daoist

Right now it's getting better at showing more of the problems with being connected to the warp.

LegateMattius
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what's qq

Paralda:if you are interested in a good psyker fic, i recommend ''the voices'' from clarencelackclarity on QQ,if you don't mind female mc and yuri
Paralda
ParaldaLv4Paralda

QuestionableQuesting

LegateMattius:what's qq