Well first of all 𥹠itâs a good story and I totally believe itâs gonna become better the author just have to give more attention to the story narration as well as itâs structure and be more extensive on the description, flexible even. Also proof reading would go a long way in looking for ways new ways to bring the novel good audience ðð Good job author keep up the good work and do not shake no matter what Vibemagic @echo9ja ððœ
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