It’s a ok fic you need a editor thou couple spelling mistakes but that’s all really could use longer chapters thou
LuciferDark
3の人に「いいね!」しました
いいねI can now confirm that Chapter 30 has 1370 words without the Author Notes at the top and bottom of the chapter I may still increase this count in the next chapter but I am afraid of making it drag too much so I will try to find a sweat spot where it's long enough but does not feel like a drag on what could have been done with much less words