it felt like a robot wrote it where is your soul man there was no drive no passion just a lot of sophisticated talk and endless drawl in your explanations i hope you write better in the future good luck
TIERNAN07
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いいねno problem if you ever consider doing a rewrite or want someone to help bounce ideas I'm always available lol
TIERNAN07:I’ll keep this in mind for future reference,I appreciate the review and honesty.