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Item: Pokemon System in Anime Worlds
Rating: 5

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Prakash_Das_7278Lv115mthPrakash_Das_7278

I just wanna say that this piece is amazing ........ the story and the development is good ......

Pokemon System in Anime Worlds

Acnologia1234

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Acnologia1234作者Acnologia1234

thanks for the comments, I will try to improve my grammar in my following chapters.

VermaWyrda:too bad the grammar is all over the place and the story lacks proper punctuation's as well as proper descriptions of who is talking or what is happening

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VermaWyrdaLv15VermaWyrda

too bad the grammar is all over the place and the story lacks proper punctuation's as well as proper descriptions of who is talking or what is happening

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Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

know what you should do is stop making chapters go back and fix what you've already written

Acnologia1234:thanks for the comments, I will try to improve my grammar in my following chapters.

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