Review Detail of Piggy in Modern Family: I want Freedom

Thanks for the honest review. About the wish fullfillment thing. It is somewhat true. I do this unconciously as I start to develop something in my mind. The best way to do this is by putting me as the mc. Of course I dont want anything to happen to me but good things. Due to this I cant really write things where something goes wrong. Help is appreciated if you can help me with it. About the fantasies. I kinda overdid it. I know. I slowed down a lot after modern family with that. About the grammatics I am at a loss. English isnt my first language, due to this I might make many mistakes I dont see myself. I really hope that my readers like you which can see these mistakes just write it in the comments. It will be a big relief for me and will help future readers better.

hey its good that you're trying to learn at least you can improve it, the only thing that really bothers me the most is the age tho its just unrealistic for an 11 yrs old to do those things maybe age him a bit like 16 or something so things wouldnt be weird or uncomfortable