Review Detail of Noob3 in Apocalypse of Demons

Author here with another review.This story was heavily inspired by jjk and so I would like you to know that I plan on making it even darker than jjk.I won't be pulling any punches so make sure you grow attached to the characters cause I want you to feel their deaths when they die.MC may be naive in the first ten chapters, but you should read up to chapter twenty and trust me you won't be disappointed ( I have written up to chapter twenty but I'm still working on the chapters)When I was planning this novel I had a hard time picking the main character but ( no one said MC's can't be replaced)Make sure to strap on your seat belts cause this is going to be a very bumpy, dark and tragic story where happy moments rarely occur.Anyways I actually wrote this review to ask my readers what makes them drop a book after reading the first few chapters so I can use your feedback to improve my story.I hope you you enjoy the story and I look forward to your response, have a lovely day .From your not so caring author ( don't mind me believe me I cry each time I know my character is about to die, actually I just look for the most realistic way out of the situation and if there isn't any he/she will die) learn to face the reality of my world. Once again have a lovely day and excuse my english. *evil laughter*