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Daoist_Bellfrost
Daoist_BellfrostLv155mthDaoist_Bellfrost

Dayum this is good... at least till now. Of all the new novels this one is the cream of the crop. The translation is good for now as there are little grammatical errors. The world background is still in the build. The character design is not too overused and the focal is less on the main character which is, truthfully quite a fresh read. No nonsensical unreasonable system. No overused "Oh I think this cultivation technique is the most suitable for me" type of story. The main character made up technique is a mishmash of various cultivation chants and made up nonsense 😂

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

Half a clear breeze

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いいね

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Vinayak22493
Vinayak22493Lv11Vinayak22493

raw???

Daoist_Bellfrost
Daoist_BellfrostLv15Daoist_Bellfrost

These are my first comment i think.... up to ch 20.

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Jay_Kabra
Jay_KabraLv3Jay_Kabra

are the enemies good? giving good fight scenes or the boring face slapping?