Review Detail of Raphis in Strange Tales of a Little Mystic

Okay, in terms of writing, everything is quite good. The sentences are very diverse, so it doesn't get too boring to read. The writing style is well-organized, although there are some parts that could be improved. The depiction of events, locations, and settings is well-written. However, what might make this novel less appealing is the slow pace in finding calming or WOW scenes, and perhaps you could promote your novel more. Because in terms of writing quality, it's already good. Keep writing this novel and strive to improve!