Review Detail of Weary_Engineer in Paving My Way With Science In This Magical Universe

Hello, I am the author of this novel. I am an engineer and always liked novels with magical settings. However, It is hard to find novels with a belivable plot and I decided to write a novel myself. In this novel I am going to try to write a story with a logical plot and characters. Please write reviews. As I am a new writer, I need lots of feedback. Thank you.