Review Detail of Laziest_Pillow in ARTS; Dinastiya

This story is... convoluted. It is hard to keep track of events, and what is going on. The constant skip from perspective to perspective with little to no links sometimes makes it hard. Like the first chapter is from the POV of one character, and the second goes over the sage who stopped the war. It could be done better, and the story could use more development and longer chapters, or at least make more chapters go over certain events. The way it looks is like a puzzle that was put together wrongly with many pieces in wrong places. It has some grammar mistakes but they are not glaring, and the paragraph structure and word choices are acceptable, but the narrative as it stands right now is problematic and hard to follow.