Review Detail of ArtbusterBeeze in The Orphan's Revenge: A Tale of Her Monster

This started off pretty dark and I kind of feel this situation as it goes deep . This story really hit me. I don't get to say that for many of them but this is what a dark beginning looks like. You nailed the situations, You had great , no, Overwhelmingly good characters, and maintained the story quality with a unique style. This drew me in. I was locked on the story. There are a few grammatical errors but they are like maybe one or two. Not nothing big to talk about. This is a story that knows what it is about. Now, there is one thing I do have to talk about, and that is the Synopis. It might just be me but when I read it, I was confused. I opened Novel and, well, it took me a good minute to understand. I'm not taking a point away from that though. Your Craft was good.