Review Detail of GloryLife in THE HONOURED ONE IN ONE PIECE
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It's pretty nice tbf, Character Writing towards Gojo is pretty accurate. Since Gojo is Egotistical and Egocentric. But one thing is Gojo would never train, he would just be Arrogant until someone defeats him and gets humbled. Other than that, pretty good story telling, but please my guy, fix your grammar, you're putting dots and commas where they shouldn't be, you're also misspelling words, and other important stuff. Other than that keep working hard and don't give up! Don't forget to re-read your chapters before Uploading.
THE HONOURED ONE IN ONE PIECE
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yeah gojo wouldn't train unless he felt threatened so really he might only train for luffy or someone on the same level as sukuna also will you add in his seven revives since he needs to unlock RCT/RCE. domain expansion but he gains that anyways just not until a year later after toji arc
bsatn_888:thank you for this good review I will try to do what you said.also if you have the time please keep commenting these kind of comments .
SAURON_:yeah gojo wouldn't train unless he felt threatened so really he might only train for luffy or someone on the same level as sukuna also will you add in his seven revives since he needs to unlock RCT/RCE. domain expansion but he gains that anyways just not until a year later after toji arcimage