Review Detail of Honoured_Disciple in Lookism After all im the Strongest

Author, I feel your story is abit rushed. Also if you don't put proper quotation marks it only gets confusing for us to differentiate between dialogue and statement. Since the mc is overpowered there is little room for development if not the mc hides his power. Short chapters don't matter to me since I am myself an author and I am currently writing a Gojo fanfiction and it has pretty short chapters.