Review Detail of DUCKINGAROUND in Lookism After all im the Strongest

i would like an explanation of how my fanfiction writing is messand how it is all cringes when Gojo Satoru have a playful and goofy nature so maybe it's cringing but not all of it, I just tried to make it a little bit cool moments and you tell me that everything is cringe? and everyone's IQ will drop to a negative state? yours judgement skill are bad i would atleast judge my book maybe 3.0-3.5 stars.

and note that this is my first book.

I already said it in my review but it seems you're IQ is so low that someone with Down syndrome would look smart just standing next to you. I will dumb down everything for you, firstly, the writing, I said it's wack, why? A LOT of grammatical mistakes, your middle schooler level narrations, and based on your reply, it seems you yourself are not aware of it, you are focusing on the wrong things, it's not the personality of Gojo that is cringe, it's the way you portray and write it that made it cringe, and you can't make "cool-moments" with trash writing. Second, your vocabulary is low, everyone talks like an NPC, especially the exchange between Gojo and James Lee. And third, if you think my judgment skills are bad because I rated your fic with 1 star, then you're someone who can't function in society, You think this abomination is worth 3.5 stars? Yes, that's possible because of the plot of Lookism that is already there, so the world-building and development already have a base(Lookism), making it worth 3 stars, however, everything so far seems to be just a self-insert with no changes in the plot of lookism besides his name getting mentioned as someone great (there is no changes in the plot of lookism.), your judgment is so bad you don't even realize what's wrong and what I'm trying to convey. Rating this fic 1 star is just right, I'm not saying it has no potential, but it's ruined by your below-mediocre writing. This is not me rating this fic 1 star just for the fun of it, I read all the chapters, and I want to see its development. I have intentions of changing this review in the future if the writing improves.

As a fellow harem hater, I will take back everything I said if the writing improves.

is that so? well i do not speak english.? and my IQ if is low probably a lot howewer im not gonna rewrite it just because one guy dont like it.