Review Detail of Supper_mega in Lookism After all im the Strongest
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you should use this " " if a character is talking because it's confusing if you dont use this" "(forgot what's it called) And this for ' ' internal monologue. though you could ignore this....
Lookism After all im the Strongest
mantaege
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im rooting for you, because usually other author tend to ignore the advice of some reader you listened though. I hope you would improve in your writing style after or during this as you write😁😁
mantaege:thank you for your review im gonna update it