Review Detail of HiddenSwordsman in NEW WORLD LOVE

My biggest issue with this app not just this story is it's inability to provide proper proofreading. English is not your first language, cook that's fine, but if you are trying to serve it to English readers having proper grammar is a must. Otherwise, your story becomes a headache to read and understand. Right off the bat I had an aneurysm trying to put proper sentences together. We are given the bare minimum of a work background and the plot while in theory an interesting concept, has little to no explanation behind it. I'm sorry dear Author but this just won't do.