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Psan
PsanLv55mthPsan

Lets give it a read. I like what you said author and i will read this now and see how it goes. Im prepared to use eye bleach if necessary but its good that rather than writting without care you trully try to improve. Now... Whats a morsan?. Also, while its to bad your mc dosnt has Raphtalia as a lover. Lets see how it goes. I will suppose the mc¿s hârêm is all original characters, but i would like to recommend saving Rino(adventurer girl who was from Motoyasu party who later is sold as slave by Malty) if its not to late.

Dark Hero in Tate no Yuusha

Thot_Slaughterer

2の人に「いいね!」しました

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Thot_Slaughterer
Thot_Slaughterer作者Thot_Slaughterer

Point noted...

Psan
PsanLv5Psan

i read all current chapters and i must say... im F impressed. well done. i dont think i can give any advice to improve and while not editorial book worthy to be sold in libraries, its almost there

Thot_Slaughterer:Point noted...
Thot_Slaughterer
Thot_Slaughterer作者Thot_Slaughterer

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. I will strive to enhance my skills further.

Psan:i read all current chapters and i must say... im F impressed. well done. i dont think i can give any advice to improve and while not editorial book worthy to be sold in libraries, its almost there