Review Detail of Raging_Silver in Endless Evolution: Last Star

Item: Endless Evolution: Last Star
Rating: 3.8

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Raging_SilverLv152mthRaging_Silver

I like this book so far, and honestly, it would make a great anime. Just correct your grammar mistakes and pacing. Overall, it's a great fantasy world book. Keep going. You're doing just fine.

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Arlemit

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Arlemit作者Arlemit

Thanks, my grammar still really sucks, doesn't it? (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)

2mth

Raging_SilverLv15Raging_Silver

Your book is good, though you need to fix a few things, but it is still very enjoyable.

Arlemit:Thanks, my grammar still really sucks, doesn't it? (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)

2mth

That_Annoying_guyLv3That_Annoying_guy

Is this single fl author?

Arlemit:Thanks, my grammar still really sucks, doesn't it? (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)

2mth