Review Detail of TheWriter117 in The Sleepwalker

This is actually a very solid thriller. I was captivated by its pacing and it doesn't waste time building tension and setting up the characters. Although the dialogue in the first chapter was a little stilted and sometimes feel like they came from grown people rather than children, this is eventually fixed in later chapters. I was pretty much hooked the moment I started reading. This seriously has potential and I might have given it 5 stars if there was more chapters.