Review Detail of Natsupatsu in I Play Football With A System

Item: I Play Football With A System
Rating: 2.8

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NatsupatsuLv127mthNatsupatsu

at the start, I really liked this story, but after a lackluster story development and a shoddy update, stability I might drop this story.

I Play Football With A System

Heavenmonarch_

3の人に「いいね!」しました

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Heavenmonarch_作者Heavenmonarch_

Could you elaborate more about the lackluster story development

3mth

RegalObscureLv3RegalObscure

Your pacing is horrible, dialogue is made by AI, romance is absolute atrocious. MC is unlikeable and his family dynamics is forced and robot like. Your jokes falls flat on delivery.

1mth