Review Detail of Natsupatsu in BEING RE-WRITTEN!!

Item: BEING RE-WRITTEN!!
Rating: 2.8

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NatsupatsuLv1310mthNatsupatsu

at the start, I really liked this story, but after a lackluster story development and a shoddy update, stability I might drop this story.

BEING RE-WRITTEN!!

Heavenmonarch_

3の人に「いいね!」しました

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Heavenmonarch_作者Heavenmonarch_

Could you elaborate more about the lackluster story development

6mth

RegalObscureLv3RegalObscure

Your pacing is horrible, dialogue is made by AI, romance is absolute atrocious. MC is unlikeable and his family dynamics is forced and robot like. Your jokes falls flat on delivery.

5mth