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md_rizvi
md_rizviLv44mthmd_rizvi

This story started good. But the more you read, the more you will get to understand, how trashy this story is. If you like an Mc with hero complex, but is also Hypocrite, disgust, ungreatful and backstabber. Then this story is for you. In this story Author, turns everyone into a villain, just to display his Hypocrite MC as Nice and Honest person.

Kill the Sun

Warmaisach

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md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

Well you won't understand, since your head is missing something, which is Braincells.

Lobstore:I find it difficult to try to comprehend what goes on in someone's head who actually thinks like this...
Warmaisach
Warmaisach作者Warmaisach

Nick is not nice nor honest, and I did not even attempt to portray him as nice or honest in the latter parts.

md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

And.... how did you portray him?

Warmaisach:Nick is not nice nor honest, and I did not even attempt to portray him as nice or honest in the latter parts.
ILostMyHeaven
ILostMyHeavenLv1ILostMyHeaven

Exactly, I feel the same. The more I read this story, the angrier I feel. Nick is one of the stupidest characters I've ever read about. It seems that the author doesn't know what he wants Nick to be. Nick's goals are to improve people's lives, but his actions are worse than those of a cruel villain. He kills people as if they were insects if that person "deserves it", but at the same time, he feels very bad when he kills someone who "doesn't deserve it" to the point of thinking about suicide. He thinks he has high morality and is the ideal person to raise a just world, but his actions only make things worse. It doesn't make any sense.

md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

I couldn't bring myself to read this novel after 344 chapters..., From my point of view, this novel is fked up. Man It had so much potential but Author just had to destroy it, with this Kind of MC. I won’t be surprised, if Nick kills Millions of people and say, "It's for the good of humanity."

ILostMyHeaven:Exactly, I feel the same. The more I read this story, the angrier I feel. Nick is one of the stupidest characters I've ever read about. It seems that the author doesn't know what he wants Nick to be. Nick's goals are to improve people's lives, but his actions are worse than those of a cruel villain. He kills people as if they were insects if that person "deserves it", but at the same time, he feels very bad when he kills someone who "doesn't deserve it" to the point of thinking about suicide. He thinks he has high morality and is the ideal person to raise a just world, but his actions only make things worse. It doesn't make any sense.
Lobstore
LobstoreLv2Lobstore

I find it difficult to try to comprehend what goes on in someone's head who actually thinks like this...

Wobbly_Dog
Wobbly_DogLv3Wobbly_Dog

I mean, where did you get the idea that this world was sunshine and roses? It is very clearly stated how messed up the morale system is due to the existence of specters and zephyx extractors. The start of the story is literally in the slums where blood is tax money… Okay, I get it. This story isn’t for you. This world is pretty dystopian.

sneakypanda
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like a realistic person in that situation would act????????? i mean come on? u wanna read about some cold hearted genius who just rationalises everything, get a grip and start appreciating character traits

md_rizvi:And.... how did you portray him?
md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

Bro did I say that this is a sun-shine world. Have you even read my review?! I have problem with Mc's problematic personality. From my point of view, I feel MC is like mimdless Robot, controled by the Author. He doesn't have any fixed personality. Author Changes MC's personality every few second and can't fix it one. And at end he chose to make the MC a hypocrite. You should read before you reply.

Wobbly_Dog:I mean, where did you get the idea that this world was sunshine and roses? It is very clearly stated how messed up the morale system is due to the existence of specters and zephyx extractors. The start of the story is literally in the slums where blood is tax money… Okay, I get it. This story isn’t for you. This world is pretty dystopian.
md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

hahaha, funny how you find MC realistic. It seems you still haven't read any top level novels.

sneakypanda:like a realistic person in that situation would act????????? i mean come on? u wanna read about some cold hearted genius who just rationalises everything, get a grip and start appreciating character traits
md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

How am suppose to appreciate a disgusting character who goes and kills his friend, who goes and kills the person who helped him.... while saying that for the good of humanity you have die. I can't appreciate this kind of hypocrite and disgusting character. Lister, if you want to suck and ride the Authors D*** then, I won't stop you. But stop telling me to appreciate a character, who doesn't even feel like a character.

sneakypanda:like a realistic person in that situation would act????????? i mean come on? u wanna read about some cold hearted genius who just rationalises everything, get a grip and start appreciating character traits
Wobbly_Dog
Wobbly_DogLv3Wobbly_Dog

You missed my point. You think that his goodness would stay the same after all the events his has experienced. That is just dumb dude. You think he would continue working under someone who has completely lost his trust? You forget that his friend built that friendship over a corpse. It was only a matter of time until the MC found out. Revenge was simply overdue. You think that the MC wanted to kill his old mentor? You forget his options at the time. It was either to forget his dream or to make a sacrifice to keep it. The story would’ve basically ended if he didn’t make a sacrifice. Either he dies or becomes a background character in the world again. You hate how the MC is a hypocrite, yet you forget how his world is of full of hypocrites. Wonder why? It is simply power. It is literally a thematic piece of the story. Look at the authoritative groups, remember how all of them use corrupt means to maintain their power. If they didn’t, then they would have to lose more than their morals. They are long past the point of what they have done, instead it is how far will they go. The MC has simply become a main participant in this rat race. Now you can’t figure out his changes, but that is because you only look at what he has done. Think about what he has lost and what he has gained. Think about what he has kept and what he keeps hidden. The MC is certainly not a likeable character, but that doesn’t mean he has no character.

md_rizvi:Bro did I say that this is a sun-shine world. Have you even read my review?! I have problem with Mc's problematic personality. From my point of view, I feel MC is like mimdless Robot, controled by the Author. He doesn't have any fixed personality. Author Changes MC's personality every few second and can't fix it one. And at end he chose to make the MC a hypocrite. You should read before you reply.
Darkgazer_666
Darkgazer_666Lv15Darkgazer_666

Man I thought I was crazy. Once wyntor died it felt extremely forced and I dropped it. And his motivations don’t make any sense. He thinks he’s some savior that can do better after he already made plenty of terrible decisions. His character does a complete 180 from how the author made him to be in the beginning.

Dexter_Sled_1111
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Bruh... chill. When next you make a review like this, try to add "Author good job on the world building, it was a 10/10" Don't just make the author feel bad, it's not right.

md_rizvi:Well you won't understand, since your head is missing something, which is Braincells.
Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv12Dexter_Sled_1111

Hm, so his thinking is flawed and based on how his road will be. Not bad, seems like an interesting character

Darkgazer_666:Man I thought I was crazy. Once wyntor died it felt extremely forced and I dropped it. And his motivations don’t make any sense. He thinks he’s some savior that can do better after he already made plenty of terrible decisions. His character does a complete 180 from how the author made him to be in the beginning.
mohamed_shaya
mohamed_shayaLv13mohamed_shaya

i read the other 2 novels from this other and his MCs dont see right and wrong as black and white but only shades of gray havent read this one yet tho i hope its even better than the first 2

md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

Yup... I felt the same. But a lot of few people doesn't understand it. In fact after my review few people came telling me that Mc behaved like a realistic person, they are saying that MC's thinking and response are realistic. I would say MC has become a psychopath and now thinks that all the bad thing he is doing right now is to save the people of the world and thinks of himself as a savior🤦‍♂️

Darkgazer_666:Man I thought I was crazy. Once wyntor died it felt extremely forced and I dropped it. And his motivations don’t make any sense. He thinks he’s some savior that can do better after he already made plenty of terrible decisions. His character does a complete 180 from how the author made him to be in the beginning.
md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

I won't say interesting. It's more like flaw from Author. Author change MC character after 300 chapters. it like he wasn't able to decide what kind of person MC should be. the worst thing of all... After MC personality changed, Author started portray everyone else as a villain🤣 which is completely different from what he has been tell us for all the previous chapters. I would say kind of hypocrite since, Author turned everyone else into a Villain just to Justify MC actions. You can disagree but hope you will give a proper reason for your disagreement.

Dexter_Sled_1111:Hm, so his thinking is flawed and based on how his road will be. Not bad, seems like an interesting character
Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv12Dexter_Sled_1111

I'm not even at chapter 220 yet, but I really hope it won't leave a bad impression on me, I'm really liking it

md_rizvi:I won't say interesting. It's more like flaw from Author. Author change MC character after 300 chapters. it like he wasn't able to decide what kind of person MC should be. the worst thing of all... After MC personality changed, Author started portray everyone else as a villain🤣 which is completely different from what he has been tell us for all the previous chapters. I would say kind of hypocrite since, Author turned everyone else into a Villain just to Justify MC actions. You can disagree but hope you will give a proper reason for your disagreement.
md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

I wouldn't have mind If MC was grey from the start. Well not that he is grey right now. It's more like after 300 chapter Author shifted MC with someone else who is not white, grey or black instead he is a Psychopath. Also the main problem of the story is the Author himself. Just to Justify MC bad and spiteful actions Author changer everyone else other then MC into a villain, which is completely different from what he told us in all the previous chapters. It's like just to justify ones crime, you will say that everyone else is bigger criminal. Pretty much hypocrite.

mohamed_shaya:i read the other 2 novels from this other and his MCs dont see right and wrong as black and white but only shades of gray havent read this one yet tho i hope its even better than the first 2