Review Detail of Chuluo in DXD: As a OC Primordial
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Kinda bad, first the mc name is Ouranos II it’s as lame as Bob Uchiha. Second the character interaction are bad all the moon god come to the moon the mc says bless the moon and they do it? Just like that? Gods are supposed to have a minimum of pride. Another example is making Gaia blush by telling her she’s pretty… Seriously
DXD: As a OC Primordial
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I expect womens like gaia who are centuries old to not blush like schoolgirls after some lame flirting. It’s not like the mc is the first guy telling her she’s pretty. Sure it’s a dxd fic but make the harem interesting with personality not just girls who are only good at blushing every compliments.
Marven123:This is a dxd fanfic what you think is going to happen.
I know who is Ouranos, but it’s still lame he’s an horrible father who got his balls cut by his children. The mc takes the name of someone unrelated to him and add 2 behind, it means all his life he will be second to Ouranos.
Helios_Sol:you don't understand the significant of the name " Ouranos" do you look up greek mythos then you'll understand also this name is way better then any name that deals with uchiha
the mc is pretty much the reincarnation of him just with the modern world knowledge also the mc is his son with how he came into being with Ouranos balls being planted into the earth that gave birth to the mc
Chuluo:I know who is Ouranos, but it’s still lame he’s an horrible father who got his balls cut by his children. The mc takes the name of someone unrelated to him and add 2 behind, it means all his life he will be second to Ouranos.
