Review Detail of Slava_Ursaki in Fate/Dark Knight

Item: Fate/Dark Knight
Rating: 2.4

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Slava_UrsakiLv212dSlava_Ursaki

Terrible way of storytelling,the dialogue and story are poorly written and the plot moves too quickly.

Fate/Dark Knight

FateAuthor

1の人に「いいね!」しました

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FateAuthor作者FateAuthor

I mean I wouldn't know if it's good or not I am just doing things by my own thoughts. Some may like it and others such as yourself may say they don't like it.

10d

FateAuthor作者FateAuthor

but anyway, just tell me what was wrong with the storytelling/dialogue so that I can improve on it.

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