Review Detail of Crytach in Naruto namikaze uzumaki
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unfortunately, i am sorry to say I will not be reading this, i apologise if it comes off as mean, however the synopsis is arguably the most important part of a book, and the fact that the synopsis is riddled with grammar and spelling errors makes me not even want to try your story as your story almost certainly will be following the same convention, author of you edit it and correct i will give it a try, however i can't in good conscience attempt to read this story.
Naruto namikaze uzumaki
Adarsha_Thapa
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Crytach:the grammar seems to be brilliant, my only caveat now is that the chapter length is VERY short... I'm sorry for being nitpicky but i just want to give you my personal opinion here, the chapters literally take me 30 seconds to read through, i appreciate that writing is hard but remember first and foremost, most people read to immerse themselves, an extremely short chapter doesn't allow someone the chance to do so.image
Adarsha_Thapa:Thank you for the review. Check the Synopsis of the story again and give review
the grammar seems to be brilliant, my only caveat now is that the chapter length is VERY short... I'm sorry for being nitpicky but i just want to give you my personal opinion here, the chapters literally take me 30 seconds to read through, i appreciate that writing is hard but remember first and foremost, most people read to immerse themselves, an extremely short chapter doesn't allow someone the chance to do so.
Adarsha_Thapa:Thank you for the review. Check the Synopsis of the story again and give review