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Review Detail of Amesaya in His Precious Possession

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Amesaya
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If you read the synopsis of the book, it won't lie to you. You get what it promises you, and that's not a bad thing. It's a cute contemporary romance story told in a somewhat unconventional double-first person method. That is to say, it shifts between the two leads, but will use first person in both cases. It clearly delineates between those shifts, however, so it shouldn't be too confusing. The grammar feels a little bit stilted, and the pacing at the beginning of the story feels a bit rushed. However, the grammatical errors to not so plague the book as to really cause problems with reading it, and the pacing works itself out once the author gets a little more comfortable with the story. Overall, I'd consider this story a worthwhile read if you enjoy the genre or if the synopsis appeals to you. It doesn't shake things up too much, but it doesn't have to. It knows what it's about, and it's focused on delivering that to the reader. Personally, I can always appreciate a story that gives me exactly what I signed up for. I give a thumbs-up.

His Precious Possession

Sristystar

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Amesaya
AmesayaLv10Amesaya

"The grammatical errors do not so plague the book", not "to not so". The grammatical correction curse struck me.