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Review Detail of Imm0rtal in Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

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Imm0rtal
Imm0rtalLv15mthImm0rtal

I don't mind you using AI to help you write, However, can your reduce the level of over-description? This excessive detail can detract from the reading experience, potentially discouraging readers, especially those with less proficiency in English.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

RealmWeaver

3の人に「いいね!」しました

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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13DaoistArbore

How are you going to gain proficiency if you avoid reading…

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LonelyPharoh
LonelyPharohLv3LonelyPharoh

I second thee, excessive details leads to boredom and skipping

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Imm0rtal
Imm0rtalLv1Imm0rtal

no you misunderstood, "my" problem isn't it being complex, but as I have spent lot of time testing Large language model I simply cannot read while seeing this amount of GPT-ism in his novel, it's annoying because nobody writes like that even the writers from the Victorian era.

DaoistArbore:How are you going to gain proficiency if you avoid reading…
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