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the the story mainly focuses on the main character but it does not focus on the other characters so therefore this story only revolves around the main character it shows a lack of character development in poor writing quality and story development therefore it has a chance to improve if it has a certain goal because the main character has no goal
Omnipotent system of the Otherworld's Judge
Billurigan
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Thanks for the review. As a note, I should say some things. The MC's goal is to enjoy his life in the new world, I don't know how many chaps you have read but I think it has been said several times. The first volume will be about world building and stuff. The mc is yet to have any grandiose goals as he is struggling to survive so sorry about that. As for the story revolving around the main character thing is valid as it is literally said in the title of the novel but I do include the perspective of other characters every now and then. As for the poor writing quality, I can't disagree with that. I have recently started using Grammarly to identify mistakes so I hope the readability improves a bit. Thanks again for the review.
Billurigan:Thanks for the review. As a note, I should say some things. The MC's goal is to enjoy his life in the new world, I don't know how many chaps you have read but I think it has been said several times. The first volume will be about world building and stuff. The mc is yet to have any grandiose goals as he is struggling to survive so sorry about that. As for the story revolving around the main character thing is valid as it is literally said in the title of the novel but I do include the perspective of other characters every now and then. As for the poor writing quality, I can't disagree with that. I have recently started using Grammarly to identify mistakes so I hope the readability improves a bit. Thanks again for the review.