You are doing good so far. The story is well written up except some grammar mistakes like your/you're and some mix up(?) word like waste/waist. I'm up to chapter 30 and ready to follow your lead.ðð
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ãããSome use Grammaly or others software to help them. So far it is well doneð. I don't know for you but english is my second language and I am sure that it is hard to be mistake free quand on parle français comme langue maternelle/ when french is your first language.Good dayð«µð€
Malamber:Thanks, I tend to let Word catch those mistakes.