Review Detail of kokishorttail in Technology And Tensura

Standard self review here, this novel is written as a Passion project and may be dropped at any time, don't expect consistent updates, This was written due to my love for technology in fantasy worlds and the fact its hard to find good ones that aren't dropped, as well as my hatred for the common idiots you see as the main characters in novels, and how supposedly "smart" characters commonly make incredibly stupid mistakes, should you enjoy my novel I would greatly appreciate any reviews, comments, edit suggestions, constructive criticism, power stones, etc, and if enough people like it I would gladly put more time into this.