Review Detail of Sen_Ritsu in Hollow Son: in an Erotic Survival RPG
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Honestly, not gonna lie, I've enjoyed this so far... First off, writing quality, no problem there for me, writing is as smooth as it should be, there's just sometimes where the paragraphs are long.... but it's still readable, as for story development..... not too slow and not fast either, Character design and world background too are also good, most especially the Character Background. It's clear Mc learns from his mistakes. Anyways, it's a 5 star for me.
Hollow Son: in an Erotic Survival RPG
Lord_GaGa
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Yes, again thank you very much for your feedback and support! It really means a lot to me, because without feedback and comments I am like without water and food. Long paragraphs are my weak spot. I'm trying to pay attention to it more than I did before, but sometimes I get carried away and don't even notice that I've written a long paragraph. In any case, thank you for the review and support!
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