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BlueJeans
BlueJeansLv31yr
2023-07-29 17:10

The book is a bit different than the usual book I used to read with the same genre. We got a lot of vivid scenes as the author are descriptive of each of event that happened in the story.I found the story interesting, but it will much better to add more interaction between the character so it will create certain dynamic between them. Overall the author did a good job on this book. Just note that, when it comes to this kind of genre. The author need to make sure not to fall for the same troupe that mainstream. At least go for a unique route for the story so it won't blend with most of the same genre category.

King of All Superhumans

Adam_Aksara
4.9
140 Chs

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Adam_Aksara
Adam_AksaraAuthor

Thanks A lot for kindly reminder [img=recommend]

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coco1193
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Impressively creative and enthralling, this book's plot captivated me from start to finish. I thoroughly relished every moment spent immersed in its pages. Moreover, the impeccable grammar added to the overall reading pleasure! Keep up the great work author!!

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ToshiroOne
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this book was super well crafted. I could easily read it even when I had little time in my day I still made time to read this novel. it was such a great read. hope to see how it turns out in 100 chapters from now. great job author.

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TsukasaFrier
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The world background and setting have caught my attention already even before I started read your book. Well description of the story and the captivating plot development make me really enjoyable to read. Perhaps the author may try to separate the story into more paragraphs to make it easier to read but it is not a issue after all. Please keep up your good work!

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Annisax
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Your book is well written and each character is properly described. I am truly impressed with the way you are able to make it seem as if I were watching a series because everything is so vivid and real. Keep up the good work because your novel has a lot of potential.

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J_vera
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The story is well-written and detailed. It has an interesting plot and I like how it has a manhwa vibe into it. ❤️

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Canterlot_City
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I'm new here and Adam Aksara's book is the first that got me hooked already. Hence, the delayed review of this book. The story is well-written and takes me to a different fascinating world, where the characters are all awesome! This book indeed deserves a five-star rating. I'm in awe! [img=recommend]

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Lo_rezi00
Lo_rezi00Lv2

although I've just read a few chapters I know I'm not going to regret investing my time in this book.plot perfectly written same with character development nice work author^_^

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Gabrielle_Johnson_6482
Gabrielle_Johnson_6482Lv14

Really well written with an engaging story so far! Excellent use of language and makes you feel like you’re right in the action. Look forward to future chapters.

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NispedanaSan
NispedanaSanLv12

This looks really good! Well-written and with a poignant tone.It feels a bit like traditional media though. Even the blocks of texts. This will probably do better as a book, than a webnovel

1yr
Hoku_1
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the world background and the grammar is very well crafted. I would definitely continue reading this. love the way the story Is starting it is very well-written and engaging!

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