The story had a nice start. it is shrouded with mysteries and suspense. writing was smooth and flowy, one could imagine things around them. the story develop in a good pace, not too fast or slow. the characters were well designed with a back story. i am more inclined to read further. best of luck author.
ArtbusterBeeze
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!