Review Detail of antmanFN in The Return of the Exiled SSS-grade Necromancer

this novel is really good so far and i enjoyed reading it their are only a few things the arthur needs to imptove on 1. is the combat i think you should be more detailed and expressive with the fighting scenes and 2. i think the mc needs more 1 first pov i don't know how he feels or thinks half the time i understand he lost his emotions but i care more about gerth,Anastashia ,and heo way more than the mc because i can't connect with him other than everything seems fine the side characters could use more scenes and details but so far this reminds me of tower of god and i hope the Arthur keeps going in that direction