Review Detail of UelUel in Ruler's Conquest

Overall the plotline and world building are very interesting. I appreciate that the author focused on introducing the setting of the story in the first chapter. on the second chapter, the story was focused on the big event that is supposed to be the start of the story but somehow I feel that the introduction of that event overlaps the introduction of the characters. Also the writing quality is good but somehow the dialogue is a little bit hard to read since it is sandwiched between the narration. For readers like who is reading using our phone, that kind of paragraph is a little bit tough to read. Overall it's an interesting read. Keep working on your book.