Nice settings and storyline but I suggest if you could put an author's note or a new chapter in auxiliary volume where you explain the Japanese words, if you don't mind so that readers could understand better. And is there meanings when you used 'wooden chest', 'wooden palm' ? cause it's my first time hearing those
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