Hello, Author. So I read this novel and just one word to say that it's an excellent work, I quite liked the way you depicts every detail and when I read it I felt like making some resembling images in my mind as you had written and how you also provided some minor details as the sound creating due to some actions but also I want to say that the way you have provided and explained things are good but actually it gives away too much of information which in returns causes to one who is reading to lose interest and doesn't read everything, and also the paras are too compact, from my point of view when I read them they just seemed too much as they are a little bit long so if possible can u improve it Then again, I really liked the way you write the Ch's and waiting for more updates.
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