Grammar is alright. I didn't see any glaring flaws in the first chapter, which is pretty good. The scene is like straight out of a shonen anime, which makes me feel like the MC is portrayed as "too cool", killing the realism and immersion for me. Also, lul, Top team in EU can't even compete with third place of South America.
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