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Ikkigaya_hachiman
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Your Writing is less expressive and more basic , Rhe characters interactions are Hard to follow and yes this is feeling cliche

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Ravis_Creations

Liked it!

いいね

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Thanks for your honest review ill try my best to improve but production is really hard