Review Detail of IvanelaFics in Tales of Mankind

It can't be denied that how the author writes the story is superb, and the conversation between the characters is smooth. Everything about the novel is enteresting even though it only has 5 chapters, but I must say that the synopsis needs a little improvement. From the first sentence or paragraph, it should hook the readers (ex. introducing the world you're building). Overall, I think this novel has a lot of potential and I look forward to its development.